for peter orlovsky in the sky
#11
It really is the hardest thing to shed those mental blocks to make a poem that's completely guileless; I guess its the great appeal of his work. It comes across in your poem, anyway. Lovely.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 04:43 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by billy - 01-11-2010, 06:34 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 07:08 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by billy - 01-11-2010, 07:16 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 08:01 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by billy - 01-11-2010, 10:01 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by addy - 01-11-2010, 05:24 PM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-12-2010, 03:13 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by addy - 01-12-2010, 08:41 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-12-2010, 08:56 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by addy - 01-12-2010, 09:32 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-12-2010, 10:00 AM



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