05-24-2019, 06:14 AM
Hi
I am new here. I do not consider myself a poet, rather, I am a story teller in rhymes. I read the reviews by very capable editors and I cannot add to their considerable wisdom. I can tell you that the poem clearly represents hopelessness where the soul is wounded by events gone by. Perhaps some mention of these shattering events would be a good eddition to your story.
I am new here. I do not consider myself a poet, rather, I am a story teller in rhymes. I read the reviews by very capable editors and I cannot add to their considerable wisdom. I can tell you that the poem clearly represents hopelessness where the soul is wounded by events gone by. Perhaps some mention of these shattering events would be a good eddition to your story.
