Stay Useless
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Hi

I am new here. I do not consider myself a poet, rather, I am a story teller in rhymes. I read the reviews by very capable editors and I cannot add to their considerable wisdom. I can tell you that the poem clearly represents hopelessness where the soul is wounded by events gone by. Perhaps some mention of these shattering events would be a good eddition to your story.
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Messages In This Thread
Stay Useless - by P3t3rW1ll14m - 04-06-2019, 11:54 AM
RE: Stay Useless - by UselessBlueprint - 04-06-2019, 12:53 PM
RE: Stay Useless - by P3t3rW1ll14m - 04-07-2019, 08:15 AM
RE: Stay Useless - by billy - 04-11-2019, 03:41 PM
RE: Stay Useless - by P3t3rW1ll14m - 04-13-2019, 10:21 PM
RE: Stay Useless - by windsor89 - 04-14-2019, 03:27 AM
RE: Stay Useless - by MadelineN - 05-03-2019, 11:12 PM
RE: Stay Useless - by Cbobgo - 05-24-2019, 01:51 AM
RE: Stay Useless - by Matroz - 05-24-2019, 06:14 AM
RE: Stay Useless - by NancyNutmeg - 06-22-2019, 06:08 AM
RE: Stay Useless - by one lass - 07-07-2019, 01:01 AM



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