On Frost

[cloud]

Hi, good visuals. 
but it lacks depth, your observations, that is.
show me what's there, but also what isn't and what could be, and what was.
overall reads well.

I stopped a while to catch my breath
The air was cold, the hour late
I could not see the woods for trees,
The snow piled up so splendidly. no quarrels with the intro, but I think everything should follow suite from here

O pretty view, O lovely show, 
of falling, melting, frozen rain this is ok, but doesn't do the beauty justice
and then again, I asked, is this  just ask the question instead
The way to go?

I saw no road, I saw the dark  switch the clause around. it's more interesting to indicate darkness first, then the lack of road
I saw the roots swell from the ground, 
A twisted bone, the snapping sound 
Of cruel and sudden injury. not sure if an injury adds anything to the central idea here

The ants and owl, the deer, the moss 
the white and crystal fingerprints nice.
of nature are skillfully made crafted
To get us lost
in labyrinths. ^ this line break helps to end more strongly