Blue Lights (Edit #2)
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Thanks all for the input here. Lot's of good thoughts to consider, and good diversity in opinions and areas covered.
I've got edit #2 going up with some subtle and some not-so-subtle changes. I'm still struggling with some points I want to include and words I want to trim, but managing both without losing some elements will be tough. I expect at least another edit at some point.

No title change as of now, but under consideration.
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Blue Lights (Edit #2) - by UselessBlueprint - 05-13-2019, 01:30 PM
RE: Blue Lights - by dukealien - 05-14-2019, 04:37 AM
RE: Blue Lights - by UselessBlueprint - 05-14-2019, 10:37 AM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by dukealien - 05-16-2019, 08:59 PM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by Knot - 05-16-2019, 11:33 PM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by busker - 05-17-2019, 05:32 AM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 05-17-2019, 12:27 PM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by Knot - 05-18-2019, 08:13 PM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by Richard - 05-18-2019, 10:14 PM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by billy - 05-19-2019, 12:33 PM
RE: Blue Lights (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 05-19-2019, 01:31 PM



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