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05-11-2019, 07:46 AM

Two Tenses
It happened once and only once. - This rhyme seems a little bit of forced and cliche, I'd suggest using something that flows more naturally.
The soul saw its own.

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Two Tenses - by celticdog - 04-30-2019, 07:32 AM

RE: Two Tenses - by Richard - 05-01-2019, 07:43 AM

RE: Two Tenses - by celticdog - 05-01-2019, 09:43 PM

RE: Two Tenses - by sudaisasif - 05-11-2019, 07:46 AM

RE: Two Tenses - by cloud - 05-19-2019, 06:12 PM

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