The Morning After
#3
Hey billy,
Thanks for the feedback. I really like your suggest about the first three lines. I will probably let this sit a bit longer before attempting an edit.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Messages In This Thread
The Morning After - by Richard - 05-03-2019, 07:36 AM
RE: The Morning After - by billy - 05-03-2019, 11:48 AM
RE: The Morning After - by Richard - 05-03-2019, 01:03 PM
RE: The Morning After - by UselessBlueprint - 05-03-2019, 09:34 PM
RE: The Morning After - by Richard - 05-04-2019, 12:22 PM
RE: The Morning After - by UselessBlueprint - 05-04-2019, 01:29 PM
RE: The Morning After - by Richard - 05-04-2019, 01:36 PM
RE: The Morning After - by Cbobgo - 05-24-2019, 12:46 AM
RE: The Morning After - by Richard - 05-27-2019, 11:32 AM



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