04-23-2019, 11:24 AM
Hey Hastavi, upon first reading this poem, I thought of the uninvited guest as someone entering a nice place and then wrecking it. After reading a few more times, I understood it to be that the house or hollow existence was already collapsing and falling apart so they in their extended stay and causing destruction was a catalyst to helping you get better. At least that's how it made sense to me. You have a good theme and some nice metaphors, I would consider playing around with some more construction type metaphors and see if something else feels like it would fit better.
Hope that helps!
Hope that helps!