Adrift
#5
Hey billy,
Thanks for the feedback. I actually wasn't too sure about this one, so I'm glad to hear that it isn't a complete train-wreck. Appreciate all you had to say about trimming the wording down in spots.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Messages In This Thread
Adrift - by Richard - 03-30-2019, 01:51 AM
RE: Adrift - by Knot - 03-30-2019, 02:30 AM
RE: Adrift - by Richard - 03-30-2019, 05:35 AM
RE: Adrift - by billy - 03-30-2019, 12:35 PM
RE: Adrift - by Richard - 03-30-2019, 11:24 PM



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