Adrift
#3
Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. I was very curious about some of my wording in spots and the use of repetition, so I appreciate what you have to say about paring it down. I actually struggled with coming up with a title, and just came up with it a couple days ago (weeks after originally writing this), so again, appreciate your thoughts about that as well.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Messages In This Thread
Adrift - by Richard - 03-30-2019, 01:51 AM
RE: Adrift - by Knot - 03-30-2019, 02:30 AM
RE: Adrift - by Richard - 03-30-2019, 05:35 AM
RE: Adrift - by billy - 03-30-2019, 12:35 PM
RE: Adrift - by Richard - 03-30-2019, 11:24 PM



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