03-30-2019, 05:35 AM
Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. I was very curious about some of my wording in spots and the use of repetition, so I appreciate what you have to say about paring it down. I actually struggled with coming up with a title, and just came up with it a couple days ago (weeks after originally writing this), so again, appreciate your thoughts about that as well.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I was very curious about some of my wording in spots and the use of repetition, so I appreciate what you have to say about paring it down. I actually struggled with coming up with a title, and just came up with it a couple days ago (weeks after originally writing this), so again, appreciate your thoughts about that as well.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.

