Adrift

[Knot]

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Hi Richard,

like the idea (and the title, which works
very well).  You've some great images,
but it seems a bit cluttered/overwritten.
Paring it back to the essentials would
be my advice.

Just a thought.


Adrift


Children's laughter litters
that same beach

where I first saw you.
A crooked heart in sand,
drawn with one toe,

my last goodbye
drowns inside an empty wine bottle.


Best, Knot.


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