Harbour Height 1st edit
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Moulting 300ft in the air, I sniff out
sea brine, mollusc dust, sprinkled into —

and crashing against— the whisky glass.
Lit by candles on the restaurant tables

and lights already reflecting
on the harbour water, I zone in on the marina

decked out in miniature, people
across the swing bridge before amber

warnings flash in the half-dark.
I can’t make out eye colour, hairstyles,

bone structure this high, just purpose
in their walk, passing blurred berths

of tugboats that look like interlocking
plastic building-blocks. Wind-whipped

walkways should entail railings.
One person pauses, sensing he is

being watched, or smelling the mollusc
dust in my drink. Joining my table.




This was the first version:


Harbour Height


 
Through another window, the maritime
marina is decked out in miniature
 
where people hurry across the swing
bridge in ones or twos before amber
 
warning-lights flash in the half-dark.
I can’t make out faces this high
 
just the purpose in their walk
passing blurred berths of tugboats
 
that look like interlocking plastic
building-blocks, as if wind-beaten
 
walkways hereabout don’t lack railings.
Except one guy, who has stopped
 
or merely paused, and shakes my hand
seeing me watching from the 27th floor.
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Harbour Height 1st edit - by carl griffin - 03-28-2019, 05:01 AM
RE: Harbour Height - by Richard - 03-28-2019, 07:10 AM
RE: Harbour Height - by billy - 03-28-2019, 11:37 AM
RE: Harbour Height - by Knot - 03-28-2019, 09:10 PM
RE: Harbour Height 1st edit - by Thunderembargo - 04-12-2019, 01:49 AM
RE: Harbour Height 1st edit - by churinga - 06-21-2019, 06:08 PM
1st edit Harbour Height - by carl griffin - 03-30-2019, 04:00 AM
RE: 1st edit Harbour Height - by billy - 03-30-2019, 12:47 PM



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