the scream
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(03-22-2019, 04:25 PM)billy Wrote:  louvres blow open
thrashed back and forth by the wind
cats claws dig in deep
nice, I'm not sure you need "back and forth", for me it clashed with the movement of L1.
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the scream - by billy - 03-22-2019, 04:25 PM
RE: the scream - by ellajam - 03-22-2019, 08:32 PM
RE: the scream - by dukealien - 03-24-2019, 06:38 AM
RE: the scream - by billy - 03-24-2019, 11:08 AM



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