03-22-2019, 07:53 AM
(03-22-2019, 07:51 AM)rowens Wrote: The technical things, I'd rather not say. I'd rather you say something about them. The sense, the powerful statement, you've accomplished. The foggy side of poetry that makes what you write stand out as something individual or original to you, saying it in a way only you could say it, that's the toughest part. For the writer and the critic.Thank you. Are there words that need to be trimmed? My biggest fear with this piece is how verbose it has gotten.

