03-22-2019, 07:15 AM
I've been working on a poem that mentions fame, basically saying that the only reason I'd want it is so one person I know might see me differently. But that's neither here nor there. . . . And I'm going to have to read the poem and give it more thought. Because this poem might not be about you. It might be about fame in general. Which it seems to be. I'm just writing this real quick to show that I'm getting into it, before I fully tackle it. So you know that you didn't post in vain.
Well, it makes sense. I get the sentiment. It's Basic Critique. But I think you want a more in depth critique. Which I'll give. If you want. But it takes longer, once again, to break everything down technically. . . . But you might not want that. So again I'll say that it's perfectly sensible, and understood.
Well, it makes sense. I get the sentiment. It's Basic Critique. But I think you want a more in depth critique. Which I'll give. If you want. But it takes longer, once again, to break everything down technically. . . . But you might not want that. So again I'll say that it's perfectly sensible, and understood.