03-19-2019, 02:20 PM
This is pretty good. It makes me keep reading it over and over. In that pure kind of poetry way. When I think of pure poetry, well what I mean by that is, it's pure words, words and sound. Every time I read it, it meant something different. And the title became more, or rather, less revealing of the meaning of the poem each time I read it.
But of course if this was supposed to mean something very specific, you failed horribly at that. But of course I might be the one that's failing.
But of course if this was supposed to mean something very specific, you failed horribly at that. But of course I might be the one that's failing.

