03-14-2019, 11:49 AM
Hey Billy,
Thanks for the feedback. I have no idea why I felt the need to revisit this one after so much time, but it just hit me the other night. I appreciate you suggestions in the last stanza, especially about moving the librarian. I think the "dusty shelf" makes a better line ending.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I have no idea why I felt the need to revisit this one after so much time, but it just hit me the other night. I appreciate you suggestions in the last stanza, especially about moving the librarian. I think the "dusty shelf" makes a better line ending.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.

