over easy (v2)
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Thanks for all of the feedback!
I'm encouraged that the parts I was happiest with are the ones that are reading well to others, and it's mostly the parts that I struggled with that still need work. So my instincts are working to some degree, even if I'm very rusty!

I've posted an updated version, I'd appreciate any further comments you may have.
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over easy (v2) - by beccaannk - 03-11-2019, 12:42 PM
RE: over easy - by billy - 03-11-2019, 02:02 PM
RE: over easy - by Knot - 03-11-2019, 07:50 PM
RE: over easy - by busker - 03-12-2019, 06:18 AM
RE: over easy (v2) - by beccaannk - 03-13-2019, 11:49 AM
RE: over easy (v2) - by billy - 03-13-2019, 12:35 PM



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