03-12-2019, 05:01 PM
Hi rowens
Great read. lovely set up to the fourth stanza which is a solid pivot point for the whole to hang on.
Particularly liked the mix of small town urban and pastoral imagery intermingling with each other which give the poem a solid and relate-able footing, in my read, for the infatuated, stalker voice.
Fav line ? too many to choose from. I could easily select one from each stanza -- but that would be tedious.
AJ (or could be CJ quite like both)
Great read. lovely set up to the fourth stanza which is a solid pivot point for the whole to hang on.
Particularly liked the mix of small town urban and pastoral imagery intermingling with each other which give the poem a solid and relate-able footing, in my read, for the infatuated, stalker voice.
Fav line ? too many to choose from. I could easily select one from each stanza -- but that would be tedious.
AJ (or could be CJ quite like both)