Late night thoughts
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Hey Jack,

I like what you are saying in the poem. I have noticed that a lot of poets seem to be moving away from rhyming at the end of every line. If you want to stick with that style, I suggest is looking at synonyms for words. So instead of using your common set of words and having to force unnecessary rhymes in to make the poem rhyme. You will find some new words and new rhymes that may work. It takes a bit of extra time, but if you use dictionary.com or something like that you can find new synonyms in no time and mix things up a bit!

Hope this helps!
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Late night thoughts - by Jackthejack - 03-03-2019, 01:37 PM
RE: Late night thoughts - by homer1950 - 03-03-2019, 04:54 PM
RE: Late night thoughts - by P3t3rW1ll14m - 03-07-2019, 05:44 AM
RE: Late night thoughts - by beccaannk - 03-10-2019, 01:05 PM



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