Stranded

Stranded

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#12

03-04-2019, 10:58 AM

Hi Fae,

The first two stanzas got me. They were telling me the struggle of putting things together into one beautiful and useful piece. But I got lost in the third and last stanzas. ‘Felt like there were two different things at the same time. It ruined the coherence.

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Stranded - by Fae - 08-15-2018, 10:59 PM

RE: Stranded - by Todd - 08-15-2018, 11:53 PM

RE: Stranded - by Fae - 08-16-2018, 01:00 AM

RE: Stranded - by Tiger the Lion - 08-16-2018, 05:34 AM

RE: Stranded - by rowens - 08-16-2018, 08:30 AM

RE: Stranded - by billy - 09-24-2018, 09:50 AM

RE: Stranded - by PenPCB - 10-17-2018, 07:23 AM

RE: Stranded - by Ally - 10-23-2018, 03:05 AM

RE: Stranded - by busker - 10-28-2018, 01:32 PM

RE: Stranded - by poemblind - 11-30-2018, 08:45 PM

RE: Stranded - by Xlateralus - 12-15-2018, 02:02 PM

RE: Stranded - by ginaparaoan - 03-04-2019, 10:58 AM

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