Friday poem

[homer1950]

Deanna very pleasant read, many of my thoughts are as the others I will add this though. Since you personified  the shadow you should have done the same through out. Example: and you Sky - I’m so jealous of you...

Cheers Homer

Shadow, you bad boy
You’re taking my golden away
He couldn’t stay
didn’t say why
But he’ll make me go green in the spring

So jealous of sky
Who gets to carry you
marry you
Woo you, sweet golden, with blue.

I stretched out to catch the last rays of today
Then you sailed away
Heading west without me
You have places to be
And I’m left like the loneliest tree