Late night thoughts

[homer1950]

Jack I like what you have here, I see what you are trying to say. and that is the most important thing when it comes to poetry (expressing yourself). I do believe you should fine tune some things here is my advice;

Start by not capitalizing every line 

Try not to force rhymes, not every line needs to rhyme with the next

Also see if there are words not needed, less words can be more powerful

Here is an example: consider removing words in the parentheses 

Thanks for sharing your Friend Homer 

Something (so) delicate as a bud 
(Has the ability to)grows into a flower.
Emotion flowing (over) like a flood 
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Leads to (who has)the power[/font][/font]