02-27-2019, 09:37 AM
Hey Ryan,
When I read your poem, I felt like it was saying a lot of things without much meaning. I know a lot of times a poet wants to rhyme but you start to lose meaning when you have to format a line to fit the rhyme. If you are fine without meter, you could always think about just switching up the rhyme pattern. so instead of AABBCCDD it could be more like ABABCDCD.
Hope that helps!
When I read your poem, I felt like it was saying a lot of things without much meaning. I know a lot of times a poet wants to rhyme but you start to lose meaning when you have to format a line to fit the rhyme. If you are fine without meter, you could always think about just switching up the rhyme pattern. so instead of AABBCCDD it could be more like ABABCDCD.
Hope that helps!