Contra Ayn Rand - Edit3

[Knot]

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Hi duke,
again, an improvement.

Don't think 'skilful' works, would 'nimble'?
( 'dexterity', without 'fingers' could do.)

Offered from a position of ignorance, but
(still having issues with 'implicit'),
how about 'dormant' ?

commas before and after 'intricately'.

not convinced by either 'loose' or 'toss',
the thought (as written) seems to work
better with 'offer',
to offer it freely
to river ...


Best, Knot.

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