Contra Ayn Rand - Edit3

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Contra Ayn Rand


Origami teaches more
    than skillful fingers, memory,
    and seeing possibilities
    implicit in material unformed;

one also learns–
    having folded labor, time
    and vision intricately
    through mute matter, owning it–

to loose it freely
    into river, wind or fire
    without regret.

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Once again, I've applied much of the advice from the valued critics, perhaps not exactly as given.  Thank you!

@billy - "dextrous" is given in one dictionary as "var. dexterous," but, really, it had to go instead of an unsightly "dext'rous."  Similarly, this is about the best preposition I could scare up that was neither 'in" nor "into."

Punctuation tweaked per @Knot, and a bit further.

My main dilemma now is whether to replace "loose" with "toss."  The t's would click nicely in that stanza, but it seems a little light for purpose.