Contra Ayn Rand - Edit3

[Knot]

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Hi duke,
like the edit, a definite improvement,
cutting 'dispossessed' and the restructured
first lines work well. My only real gripe is
with the placement of the dash, I think it
should come after 'learns' (if you read the
piece, ignoring the section between the
dashes, it doesn't work at present).

Not sure how necessary 'implicit' is,
it is implied by 'unformed', isn't it?

As to the two intos, how about:
one also learns -
having intricately folded
labor, time and vision, creating
matter, [and] owning it – ?


Best, Knot.

idea of returning to a blank sheet of paper.  That's an intriguing thought, but with origami paper
there's a real note of entropy:  order is imposed, but it's one-way.

True, but once it's loosed freely, all you have left is the next 'sheet of paper'.
(I wonder if one could argue that the missing line, reveals the empty page,
and so the next sheet of paper is implied?)

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