02-15-2019, 02:30 PM
Hi Knot,
Thanks so much for the comments! I think you're right about the switch to the "farm" being too fast -- I'll play around and see about adding some more before that. And yes, S3 felt off to me too. I wanted to open up the poem a bit beyond the hips, but maybe I do need to keep it more closely tied to that image for it to work. I'll experiment with that more.
Best,
ing4
Thanks so much for the comments! I think you're right about the switch to the "farm" being too fast -- I'll play around and see about adding some more before that. And yes, S3 felt off to me too. I wanted to open up the poem a bit beyond the hips, but maybe I do need to keep it more closely tied to that image for it to work. I'll experiment with that more.
Best,
ing4