02-15-2019, 12:38 PM
Obsession. (This is my second poem and i'm a tad lost any critique is helpful)
I think you were right love is just obsession
I want to own you, be my possession
My sweat drowns me during the night
But i will not give up without a fight
Love truly is a fickle beast
Why do i want to die last, but not least
I was the strongest man at my fathers funeral
The things i lost to love are numeral
I will place the wolrd on my shoulders once more
I will sustain loves burden and ruin all i abhor
I shall conquer this vicious world
As my true strength has unfurled
This malicious pain will be my salvation
I will conquer this temptation
And then it will be time for true redemption
I will shatter any and all, this will be my ascension
I shall stand atop the heavens
Sit and laugh as my demons beckon
I will become the man i promised to be
Not even a god will be able to stand aside me
Atleast without immeasurable shame
Because i will be the true winner of this game
Then maybe you'll choose to be my possession
Then this love is no longer obsession.
I think you were right love is just obsession
I want to own you, be my possession
My sweat drowns me during the night
But i will not give up without a fight
Love truly is a fickle beast
Why do i want to die last, but not least
I was the strongest man at my fathers funeral
The things i lost to love are numeral
I will place the wolrd on my shoulders once more
I will sustain loves burden and ruin all i abhor
I shall conquer this vicious world
As my true strength has unfurled
This malicious pain will be my salvation
I will conquer this temptation
And then it will be time for true redemption
I will shatter any and all, this will be my ascension
I shall stand atop the heavens
Sit and laugh as my demons beckon
I will become the man i promised to be
Not even a god will be able to stand aside me
Atleast without immeasurable shame
Because i will be the true winner of this game
Then maybe you'll choose to be my possession
Then this love is no longer obsession.