02-14-2019, 07:55 PM
Hey dude, i quite liked you poem.
I am by no means a poet, nonetheless.
I feel like you could try and get your verses to flow together a little better, eg the part where you succumb i think you should give the previous line a little more depth
good stuff though mate keep ot up
I am by no means a poet, nonetheless.
I feel like you could try and get your verses to flow together a little better, eg the part where you succumb i think you should give the previous line a little more depth
good stuff though mate keep ot up