R.I.P.

[billy]

R.I.P.

Beauty in the midst of death; painful and scarring,

No escape from such a natural fate,

But rest in utter silence and peace.

No longer to suffer,

Nothing more to lose,

And no more pain to endure.

Beauty in the midst of death; peaceful and silent.

Forever, R.I.P.

hi Cesar. basically it says death is forever.  you need to use some solid images, metaphor, similes. try not to use words like beauty. show us the person who were they in life, what were they to you, how did they live.