Winter Ode
#6
Hey billy and Cesar,
Thanks for the feedback. Will give this some thought. I do want to improve the meter and rhyme here, so I appreciate the suggestions about them.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Messages In This Thread
Winter Ode - by Richard - 02-04-2019, 02:13 AM
RE: Winter Ode - by dukealien - 02-04-2019, 09:33 AM
RE: Winter Ode - by Richard - 02-04-2019, 12:11 PM
RE: Winter Ode - by billy - 02-04-2019, 03:21 PM
RE: Winter Ode - by Cesar - 02-06-2019, 10:37 PM
RE: Winter Ode - by Richard - 02-08-2019, 08:41 AM



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