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First Edit: Ghost Story

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01-30-2019, 12:42 PM

Hey all,
I decided to revisit this poem. I didn't make a ton of changes, but feel free to let me know if it's a step in the right direction. I don't know why, but I've felt like going back to revisiting some of my older poems lately.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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First Edit: Ghost Story - by Richard - 10-29-2017, 02:57 AM

RE: Ghost Story - by vagabond - 10-29-2017, 08:18 AM

RE: Ghost Story - by CRNDLSM - 10-29-2017, 11:12 PM

RE: Ghost Story - by Richard - 10-30-2017, 03:30 AM

RE: Ghost Story - by ellajam - 10-30-2017, 04:42 AM

RE: Ghost Story - by Richard - 10-30-2017, 11:46 AM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by Richard - 01-30-2019, 12:42 PM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by homer1950 - 01-30-2019, 01:13 PM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by Richard - 01-31-2019, 08:49 AM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by billy - 02-01-2019, 05:41 PM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by Richard - 02-02-2019, 12:12 PM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by Knot - 02-02-2019, 08:46 PM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by Richard - 02-04-2019, 01:54 AM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by billy - 02-04-2019, 03:46 PM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by rowens - 02-05-2019, 08:51 AM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by Richard - 02-08-2019, 08:53 AM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by ing4 - 02-14-2019, 01:05 AM

RE: First Edit: Ghost Story - by Richard - 02-14-2019, 01:15 PM

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