01-25-2019, 10:40 AM
Hey billy,
Thanks for the feedback. This is an adult party in the poem. However, I never thought about how the way I describe the cake could make it sound otherwise, so that is something I need to look at. The "who are they?" question is a good point too. I need to give this some thought.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. This is an adult party in the poem. However, I never thought about how the way I describe the cake could make it sound otherwise, so that is something I need to look at. The "who are they?" question is a good point too. I need to give this some thought.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.