Solstice
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It has shades of The Hollow Men, but some of the lines do very well:

My knee means I have a new name,

is nice, and

We are no longer us, but brainless afterglows,
till finally I find myself on the winged arms
of a story, a compacted plot fading
seamlessly into the morning light.

is very well done
thanks for the read
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Solstice - by rowens - 01-15-2019, 06:28 AM
RE: Solstice - by billy - 01-16-2019, 10:50 AM
RE: Solstice - by busker - 01-16-2019, 05:46 PM
RE: Solstice - by rowens - 01-17-2019, 02:59 AM



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