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First Edit: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree

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01-06-2019, 09:12 AM

Hey Truerenigma,
Thanks for the feedback. The second stanza seems to need some work based on what everyone said.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Richard - 12-24-2018, 04:58 AM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Knot - 12-24-2018, 09:14 PM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Richard - 12-25-2018, 06:11 AM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Xlateralus - 12-25-2018, 03:54 PM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by billy - 12-26-2018, 06:29 PM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Richard - 12-28-2018, 06:47 AM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by alonso ramoran - 12-31-2018, 01:48 PM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Richard - 01-02-2019, 03:45 AM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Truerenigma - 01-05-2019, 11:07 AM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Richard - 01-06-2019, 09:12 AM

RE: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by churinga - 07-01-2019, 05:49 AM

RE: First Edit: Lonesome as a Hotel Lobby Christmas Tree - by Richard - 07-01-2019, 11:12 AM

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