01-04-2019, 02:19 PM
hi illya, first off, thanks for the feedback you've been giving.
i moved your spoken word poem to miscellaneous. is the voice yours of is it mechanical? it sounds a bit like the latter though it still sounds okay.
good to see you aren't using cliches, sometimes they're hard to get away from in spoken word.
i moved your spoken word poem to miscellaneous. is the voice yours of is it mechanical? it sounds a bit like the latter though it still sounds okay.
good to see you aren't using cliches, sometimes they're hard to get away from in spoken word.
(01-04-2019, 05:33 AM)illya_v Wrote: Here is my 4th spoken word poem on YouTube about how mediated stimuli fashions culture and ideology through language: