12-26-2018, 09:35 AM
Bravo! Had to read it a bunch of times to make sure that maybe I got it all, its thematic progression. It does what it intends to do so well. And your line breaks are impeccably clean, and serve to sustain the particular tonality of the poem as I read it to myself in my mind. You're a wonderful poet, Leanne. I really like this one. Merry Xmas.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."