12-24-2018, 04:32 AM
Hi Leanne,
I like this a lot. I recognise Yeats again (last spotted in a poem by rowens) and I have a wry smile throughout due to my enjoyment. I like the image of the floating deity and the instructions towards the end. In fact, a leprechaun comes to mind (I'm partly Irish), perhaps because of the whispering, which seems a little mischievous.
I'm a bit feverish and foolish with it at the moment, but I'll try to come back with some more interesting thoughts soon.
Best wishes,
Ally
I like this a lot. I recognise Yeats again (last spotted in a poem by rowens) and I have a wry smile throughout due to my enjoyment. I like the image of the floating deity and the instructions towards the end. In fact, a leprechaun comes to mind (I'm partly Irish), perhaps because of the whispering, which seems a little mischievous.
I'm a bit feverish and foolish with it at the moment, but I'll try to come back with some more interesting thoughts soon.
Best wishes,
Ally
Please note, I'm away at the moment because my partner is unwell and he requires a little extra TLC.