12-23-2018, 01:09 AM
Leanne, I know you'd rather us comment on the poem. But I see absolutely nothing that I could say to improve the poem. It is what it is. So all I can say is about how it is a conversation starter. As for the originality of it, we both know how funny that is. Because people are still living in biblical times, in a great mass, so it is still a timely poem.