Motorcycle Leather
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Hi Wjames.


Economically drawn, but
could be a little tighter I
think.


Motorcycle Leather


Gravel punctures the lung
[of the tire,] I roll.
[b]ranches claw at my face[,]
[[/b]my] [b]hands, draw blood.


[S]lowly I stand up[.]
[S]tones [have] stuck inside
[/b]- anything a bit more dynamic
than 'stuck inside'?
[b]the skin above my heart.

[/b]- I think 'I wear' is unnecessary
given the title.


Enjoyed the read.


Best, Knot.


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Messages In This Thread
Motorcycle Leather - by Wjames - 12-16-2018, 03:19 PM
RE: Motorcycle Leather - by Knot - 12-16-2018, 11:07 PM
RE: Motorcycle Leather - by CRNDLSM - 12-17-2018, 01:00 AM
RE: Motorcycle Leather - by billy - 12-17-2018, 03:13 PM
RE: Motorcycle Leather - by Richard - 12-19-2018, 12:41 PM
RE: Motorcycle Leather - by Xlateralus - 12-19-2018, 02:21 PM



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