Edit 3: Beginners

Edit 3: Beginners

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12-10-2018, 02:59 AM

Hey guys,

Made some minor changes. Still stuck on how to fix the "where" and "tear" rhymes and rearrange the meter on L8, so any suggestions on that front would be of big help. Otherwise, I'd also like to hear your thoughts on the current changes I made and any other issues you might have as well.

Thank you,
Alex

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Edit 3: Beginners - by alonso ramoran - 11-15-2018, 04:11 AM

RE: Beginners - by Keith - 11-15-2018, 06:16 AM

RE: Beginners - by billy - 11-15-2018, 09:35 AM

RE: Beginners - by alonso ramoran - 11-16-2018, 12:26 AM

RE: Beginners - by billy - 11-17-2018, 03:51 PM

RE: Edit 1: Beginners - by alonso ramoran - 12-10-2018, 02:59 AM

RE: Edit 1: Beginners - by billy - 12-12-2018, 01:04 PM

RE: Edit 2: Beginners - by alonso ramoran - 12-21-2018, 05:09 AM

RE: Edit 2: Beginners - by billy - 12-21-2018, 11:01 AM

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