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Convincing the Alligator

Convincing the Alligator
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12-08-2018, 06:19 PM
feel like the third line doesn't need 'language' --- bluntness suits this piece's dark message. lovely, scary work, although my generally-paralyzed-by-diabetes grandfather seems to be living a happy enough life himself.
[Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Qgwfm9NUY8]
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Convincing the Alligator - by Mark A Becker - 12-07-2018, 12:00 PM
RE: Convincing the Alligator - by billy - 12-07-2018, 12:28 PM
RE: Convincing the Alligator - by Mark A Becker - 12-08-2018, 01:14 AM
RE: Convincing the Alligator - by billy - 12-08-2018, 04:28 PM
RE: Convincing the Alligator - by RiverNotch - 12-08-2018, 06:19 PM
RE: Convincing the Alligator - by Ally - 12-10-2018, 03:57 AM
RE: Convincing the Alligator - by pigpoem - 12-12-2018, 08:39 AM
RE: Convincing the Alligator - by Mark A Becker - 12-21-2018, 09:33 AM



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