12-04-2018, 11:37 AM
hi river, while i like it, it doesn't seem very cataclysmic.
(12-02-2018, 05:44 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: Creeks become rivers,
Rivers become straits,
Straits become seas,
Seas become oceans,
This narrow strip of land
We once called love
Will be swallowed by the heat,
We'll be swallowed by the heat.
It's easier to compose than to critique without a computer,
