12-04-2018, 04:14 AM
Hi Richard,
Sorry; delay again. Thanks for your additional comment. Yes, 'v.g.' is more concise and I'm happy you think it's pretty much there. It's my favourite version, not that I'm the best judge of anything, hehe.
To be honest, I'm probably not a very good workshopper because the bit I like most about poetry is writing it, even if it's rubbish (sometimes, especially if it's rubbish). I think that's because I have so many writing rules to observe in my day jobs, so out of office hours I just want to throw a party, if that makes sense. Anyway, thanks again; it's all appreciated.
Best wishes,
Ally
PS: I know I've got catching up to do with offering critique (such as it is), and I'm hoping to get on with that soon :-)
Sorry; delay again. Thanks for your additional comment. Yes, 'v.g.' is more concise and I'm happy you think it's pretty much there. It's my favourite version, not that I'm the best judge of anything, hehe.
To be honest, I'm probably not a very good workshopper because the bit I like most about poetry is writing it, even if it's rubbish (sometimes, especially if it's rubbish). I think that's because I have so many writing rules to observe in my day jobs, so out of office hours I just want to throw a party, if that makes sense. Anyway, thanks again; it's all appreciated.
Best wishes,
Ally
PS: I know I've got catching up to do with offering critique (such as it is), and I'm hoping to get on with that soon :-)
Please note, I'm away at the moment because my partner is unwell and he requires a little extra TLC.