11-23-2018, 03:52 AM
Hi loboflo,
I think this has a lot of potential, whichever direction you take it. Perhaps you could reorder some of the questions for greater impact? However, that's a very tentative suggestion, as I realise there might be a reason for how it's structured at the moment and I can't see it because I don't have enough experience. Also, I'm not familiar with open-mic poetry, although I recently made a friend who attends poetry slams :-)
Best wishes,
Ally
I think this has a lot of potential, whichever direction you take it. Perhaps you could reorder some of the questions for greater impact? However, that's a very tentative suggestion, as I realise there might be a reason for how it's structured at the moment and I can't see it because I don't have enough experience. Also, I'm not familiar with open-mic poetry, although I recently made a friend who attends poetry slams :-)
Best wishes,
Ally
Please note, I'm away at the moment because my partner is unwell and he requires a little extra TLC.