11-19-2018, 01:13 PM
love the line and the 2nd, good images. would a semi colo work better than a comma after trail? and should it be summer's as in summer is. not sure about the summer's but felt i had to castigate you for it
apart from the two nits it was delightful.
apart from the two nits it was delightful.(11-19-2018, 05:44 AM)Keith Wrote: Autumn licks the back of its transfers
and sticks decay onto cobblestones.
Another bike trail, blue sky pant,
keeps winter cramped
and summers just a shout downstairs
for the warmth of a hot-water bottle.
