Cycles
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love the line and the 2nd, good images. would a semi colo work better than a comma after trail? and should it be summer's as in summer is. not sure about the summer's but felt i had to castigate you for it Big Grin apart from the two nits it was delightful.

(11-19-2018, 05:44 AM)Keith Wrote:  Autumn licks the back of its transfers
and sticks decay onto cobblestones.

Another bike trail, blue sky pant,
keeps winter cramped

and summers just a shout downstairs
for the warmth of a hot-water bottle.
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Cycles - by Keith - 11-19-2018, 05:44 AM
RE: Cycles - by billy - 11-19-2018, 01:13 PM
RE: Cycles - by Keith - 11-20-2018, 03:57 PM



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