First Edit: Cold Concrete Steps

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First Edit: Cold Concrete Steps

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11-17-2018, 01:38 PM

Hey all,
I decided to experiment a bit with the edit of this poem. Feel free to let me know what you think.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

Time is the best editor.

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First Edit: Cold Concrete Steps - by Richard - 10-27-2018, 12:03 PM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by billy - 10-27-2018, 02:58 PM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by Richard - 10-27-2018, 09:08 PM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by Knot - 10-27-2018, 09:19 PM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by Richard - 10-28-2018, 07:53 AM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by busker - 10-28-2018, 01:18 PM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by Richard - 10-28-2018, 01:26 PM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by Thunderembargo - 11-07-2018, 12:08 PM

RE: Cold Concrete Steps - by Richard - 11-07-2018, 01:26 PM

RE: First Edit: Cold Concrete Steps - by Richard - 11-17-2018, 01:38 PM

RE: First Edit: Cold Concrete Steps - by billy - 11-17-2018, 04:03 PM

RE: First Edit: Cold Concrete Steps - by Knot - 11-17-2018, 09:04 PM

RE: First Edit: Cold Concrete Steps - by Richard - 11-17-2018, 11:56 PM

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