Honey

[Keith]

Honey
I like the title and the threaded links to the poem, I also enjoyed the the shifting season sketched out amongst your images some comment below, Best Keith

The king is not fit for meat Solid opening that got my attention, maybe something before king to bring out the image but im not sure
and so is left by the side of the road
until summer. This lets us find the image so ignore my first line about something more

A bear digs his claws into the carcass. reinforces the opening but this line is a bit bland, if that make sense
Belly full, he lies in a cave. I thought the opening was about a bird so belly full didnt seem to fit.

Thieves pour bronze down a deacon's throat. Jackdaws attacking a robin was what I saw here
Left for dead, he unties his bonds, stands up, I like 'left for dead' and for me it works but could be called out as cliche
and prophesies the return of the Lord. Solid stanza taking us into easter

Snow falls in the church
like feathers -- or floating worms. really like the close it made me look up to the steeple then down to the graveyard, very nice indeed