Odysseus in a Mental Hospital
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not sure of the lie break in line 4. i like how this is about ody being mad if nothing more than the fact he pretended to be mad to stop entering the trojan wars. i also like the use of p instead of penelope. it brings her into a modern realm. there's a goodish mix of myth and modern that the reader can be mistaken if they felt it was a real Odysseus in the nuthouse.
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Odysseus in a Mental Hospital - by rowens - 11-12-2018, 02:44 AM
RE: Odysseus in a Mental Hospital - by billy - 11-12-2018, 09:29 AM
RE: Odysseus in a Mental Hospital - by rowens - 12-08-2018, 06:41 PM
RE: Odysseus in a Mental Hospital - by rowens - 12-17-2018, 01:43 AM
RE: Odysseus in a Mental Hospital - by billy - 12-17-2018, 11:35 AM



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