Greg's grebe (v.g)

[Ally]

Welcome back, Knot and billy,

Thanks for these additional comments :-) :>) (the grebe has helped with this latest version)

I've made just a few small changes. I'm happy with S2, as it invites the reader to use a little imagination. 'Sexual conquests' is one area of study, like a degree course, maybe.

Best wishes,
Ally